Sarah, On the whole, many of these are really strong. The entire page of the Native-dressed dancer is a keeper, as is the page above it. Each page has some really strong points. I would suggest to control WHERE the darker lines are being placed - not just to go over a "mistake," but to consciously dictate overlap - because a lot of these have really great overlap. Well done.
Sarah,
ReplyDeleteOn the whole, many of these are really strong.
The entire page of the Native-dressed dancer is a keeper, as is the page above it. Each page has some really strong points. I would suggest to control WHERE the darker lines are being placed - not just to go over a "mistake," but to consciously dictate overlap - because a lot of these have really great overlap.
Well done.